I am a Year seven student at Yaldhurst Model School, which is located on the outskirts of Christchurch, NZ. I am in Rimu class and my teacher Miss Blair. :)
Kia ora Bella great work on the poems. It's cool how you used lots of different describing words and background that show what you're talking about. I especially loved the one about Smokey the cat. But it would be even better if you told us a little more about Smokey. How old was he when he died?
Hi Bella my name is Victor. I liked your poem. It was really cool. I liked your cat poem. You could try to add some more colour.https://www.blogger.com/home?pli=1
Kia ora Bella great work on the poems. It's cool how you used lots of different describing words and background that show what you're talking about. I especially loved the one about Smokey the cat. But it would be even better if you told us a little more about Smokey. How old was he when he died?
ReplyDeleteI am sorry Jemma we don't know how old he was because he got given to us when we bought our last house because the previous owners moved to australia.
DeleteHi Bella my name is Victor. I liked your poem. It was really cool. I liked your cat poem. You could try to add some more colour.https://www.blogger.com/home?pli=1
ReplyDeleteI know that I should put more colour but I forgot to after we printed them out. (We didn't have enough colour for the whole class
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