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Thursday, July 7, 2016

Our Class Hike

After our hike on monday we had to write a haiku on it this is mine, hope you like it.
please comment,

The Hike

Walking up for hours
Extravagant scenery
Long, fun and tiring
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4 comments:

  1. AnonymousAugust 5, 2016 at 9:23 AM

    Hello Bella
    I like you new post but can you explain it a bit more and say what is and was like just a pit more too.

    kind Regards
    Andrew from Awahono School

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    1. AnonymousAugust 11, 2016 at 1:33 PM

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    2. AnonymousAugust 11, 2016 at 2:01 PM

      Thanks Andrew,
      Sorry I was in a rush to publish the post and didn’t write much and also next time you might want to reread your comments.

      Bella
      Yaldhurst Model School

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  2. AnonymousAugust 8, 2016 at 9:31 AM

    Hello Bella!
    Great Work on your post and I think your haiku is awesome. I think you could have explained what a haiku is for those who don't know what it is. Great work though!

    - Kind Regards,
    Hayley

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